Today, I had a rehearsal with two of my classmates and I showed them my final ideas for my piece. I come to realise that I had to make a few changes in terms of the poem and I also faced problems with how to keep the chain on my ankle and how to take it off easily, quickly and without taking to long.

In terms of the structure of my piece, my classmates said it worked very well and was effective to what I am trying to show through my piece. They also said that the content of the piece was really good and made them feel many different emotions, but the ending made them feel positive and happy for me as they could tell that it was about me finally getting over my mum and moving on for the better.

I am feeling very positive about my piece now.